Critique on the Newspaper

#1 Soccer scholar Jesus Cruz signs with High-Point
By Clarissa Marquez

I like that they put what he plans to major in while he plays soccer at High-Point. I like that they also put the other colleges that were interested in him. What I didn't like is that they didn't use enough quotes, I think that they should of used more quotes.I think it is a good article they pretty much give details and stuff, just use more quotes.

#2 The Killers come to Austin for a "Day and Age"
By Ricky Valenzuela

I like that in the beginning that he started off like you were actually there and the concert was just starting. I also liked that he also put a little comedy in it "with overpriced cups of beer". I also like that they mentioned all three of their CDs. I think that they could of maybe tried to find some people that went to the concert and got some input from them and added it in.

#3 Book Review: City of Ashes
By Alma Benitez

I like that they put some of the first book info because this is the second one that she is talking about. I like that she kind of tells what the story is about but she doesn't give everything away.I think that maybe they could of added maybe a little more information on the first book.